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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII! I may have read this already...can't be sure...but even if I did, it was worth a re-read. :D Yet another cute fic. I'm glad he found his happy ever after. ::nods::
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sucha cute ending wish there was a sequel to it.
keep up the good work.
keep up the good work.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again it was sweet, even with all the angst and negation from Naruto's side
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very impressive! nicely written.
the structuring of a poem but without actually being one.
it's more like a ballad, kind of reminds me of beowulf.
very believeable too. love the way you did naruto's perceptions of those arond him.
it truely is amazing. - it's been a while since I found a new work that I could enjoy and add to my collection of fanfics.
the structuring of a poem but without actually being one.
it's more like a ballad, kind of reminds me of beowulf.
very believeable too. love the way you did naruto's perceptions of those arond him.
it truely is amazing. - it's been a while since I found a new work that I could enjoy and add to my collection of fanfics.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Simply wow. This was fantastic. The simply way you word everything perfectly mimics Naruto's thinking. Very, very, good.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry!!!
It was so... touchy. I liked it! Good, that you published it!
It was so... touchy. I liked it! Good, that you published it!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was pretty powerful. I think you really tapped into his loneliness there. And the use of repetitive phrases really gives it a wonderful impact. I'm glad your sister told you to post it.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, that's so adorable!!!
~awww~
~awww~