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by promise2003

person Kay-san
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So...so...so freakin' sweet!!! I loved it! Gaara and Naruto are just too cute together. But, I do feel for poor Sasuke. If Kakashi would quit being such an idiot everyone could be happy. (Seriously, I love Kakashi and all, but geesh! In this the guy's a cad.)

And now a request. I know you said you're going to mess with people's hearts and then there'll be a happy ending, but PLEASE don't have lemons with switched-up couples! It'll take away from the sweetness of their relationships. I mean I'm sure whatever you have planned will work out wonderfully, but I can't see any switched lemons working well.

Anyway, enough rambling. Please forgive Kay-san, she babbles incoherently when tired. Eagerly awaiting the next installment! Hugs & Kisses!
person Fourthiv
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! A new chapter! It was so cute! I hope things get better for Sasuke, I really feel bad for him. [stupid kakashi]
person Cindy
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girl, if you let Sasuke mess this up... :( Besides 'Kashi needs someone to heal his heart (I can't believe you killed Iruka! Did some missing nin storm the school or what? ;)

angst, angst, angst


Wonderful chapter~! - in the snow and how Naruto uses the sites in Konoha to tell Gaara how much he means to him. *sigh*


person Jen
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG! that was so cheesy and loveable! i love your fanfics you know exactly what to write and the perfect time to write them!

i really love your work and i´m getting addicted to this! yaya i´m so happy!please post soon i need to know what will happen to kkashi and sasuke and what is in that note!

luv and inspiration is what i wish for you!! keep the good work!
person Stagoya
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that's so cute!!! I do feel bad for Sasuke, as much as I dislike him at times. Poor fella. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next, even if I will get my heartstrings ripped out.
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon ^^ great story
person staplersbreak
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* grabs hankie. I wish Naru-kun was MY boyfriend!
person Donedin
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a GREAT fic, I just started reading it. Im just curious about what you mean about heart strings... does this mean you are going t break Naru and Gaara up?! Cause if it does I think that i'll happily stop reading right here. But if the drama starts with Sasuke and Kakashi then I will GLADLY continue reading.. im kinda into the fluffy endings and stuff. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, nice and fuzzy.

Can't you just feel the warmth.
person Cindy
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice Sakura/Kankuro at the beginning while waiting for Naru/Gaa. I hope we get to see a bit of what they are doing in Sakura's bed...

I love, love, love Temari's rxn when she finds out she is Kazekage (and Shika's)~!


THANKS!!!!

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