rate_review Reviews

I hate Mpreg. I hate it with a fiery passion. On the other hand, I was startled to see how believable you made the circumstances behind this Mpreg. So while I don't like the concept still, I have to give you kudos on your ability to make this believble. Oh, and I just meant the concept of mpreg, not your story concept. The story is good, and so is your writing. Keep up the good work.
ItaNaru is the yummeh <#3

I completely love your story and I can't wait for more. I feel so sorry for Naruto, you even made me cried in some part, you're so mean to Naruto, but I just love the story hehehe I hope that he find some happiest soon, but I some how don't that would happen..

oh! that was good. the story isn't all that bad but you could probably fix it a bit. But please! Do update!

continue or die

hee. itanaru *hearts you* my OTP! ^^ i love you... i wish you will continue this wonderful fic... hopefully not having naruto care for itachi in a "stockholme syndrome" way... but still, i enjoyed the two chapters a lot, since i love naruto angst (and naruto centric fics).

i have to say i enjoy your descriptions and the flowing of the fic, especially as in ICism with the characters and the situations. naruto will pull it through, even in such situation, but i fear for the bastard's reaction (sasuke i mean...) to what itachi did to my naruto. all in all, this is a very promising fic and i can't wait to read more. you should add something about tsunade's reaction to naruto merging with kyuubi, because it's not something that happens everyday and it holds a lotof importance.

that said, i hope for more. itanaru is my absolute love, so i would like you to continue that way, even if in the end this fic will turn into sasunaru... i hope you will write more itanaru. (you could eventually read mine XDXDXD *gets shot*).

see yah! ^^

SOY/MF/Ceph