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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the plot and the story very much.the story flows very well, it also reminds me of a book i read.another thing if i may ask is this going to be a sasukeXhinata story because if it is i support it all the way! update soon.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i definitely like this so far. it's new, interesting, and well written. though, i'm a bit confused as to why you have it spaced like that and with the things written in parenthesis. i hope you update soon though and if you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me.
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