rate_review Reviews

I always knew that Kankuro wasn't the brightest of the three...hee-hee. It good for your first time. I think that when you write your next fic you should elongate the descriptions of what is happening just a bit, sometimes I felt just a tad lost in the happenings. It wasn't terribly skippy, but I really like the quirky plot, so I want to see more and I think that you can make it spectacular.


*Waves a happy flag and does a jig because it was great first fic*