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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, that ninja turtle line was priceless. but...! what about naruto? are you really going to have him looking all foxy for the rest of his life? 'cause i agree wholeheartedly with sasuke that the villagers just aren't going to like that. and poor kyuubi... feeling such things as heartbreak. it's sad, really. i can only hope that when everyone wakes up, things are back to normal. children aren't dead, heroes aren't foxy, eyes are where they belong, etc. ^.~ i look forward to the next chapter, then!!
person MsTrick
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, you said 'ninja turtle'. I love your story to death, you know that, but I have to admit, I'm kind of hoping Naruto doesn't keep the tails and such. I like him the way he is. ;) Can't wait for more!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo cool. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa - so it ended huh sasuke and naruto will be okay right? I felt reall proud of Sakura when she stood up and started yelling, i also burst out laughing when Hiroki asked Kiba about Gai's turtle looooooooooooooooool - i ca't help it, I have nothing against turtle's but loool it's just funny, i'm always reminded of gai-sensei's first ever apperance on Naruto heh. Also Sai commenting on the hard battle made me snicker heh - if I was Kiba I probably would've smacked him round the head lol.

Anyway it was a greta chapter but when I read that the chapters wouldn't reach 70 i felt a little sad :s - but then I thought, no worries, I'll just re-read it all plus you have Blackmail and Betrayal out too so it's all good ^_^

Thanks for the update ^_6
Hina xXxx
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
p.s. I felt bad for Kyubi :s I actually felt really sad and wanted to hug him - although... that probably wouldn't be a smat idea on my part lol

Hina xXxx
person fangirl
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I don't even know how you managed to have a multi-chapter fight scene and still keep it interesting for me cause I usually can't stand fight scenes. The strategy was great and everything just flows so well. I can't wait for the reunions, which I hope will be next chapter. Sakura still hasn't figured out about Sasuke and Naruto yet, has she? Can't wait for next week!!
person Raina
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I have to review this now (O.o why am I apologizing?) This story is AWESOME!! I love it! It's like... just... I don't know how to put it into words!! I can tell you that this is a procrastinator's (like me) dream! I love the action, I love the twists! It's so exciting and I am always pumped to read the next chapters and I only finished chapter 10! I gotta go read the rest, but I just had to say: WOW!

(oh and I can't believe this was your first fan fiction *quells jealousy* I know you have more now, which are also awesome, you are a very talented writer)

-Rai
person animehead
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stop teasing me!!! I need more. Why do you do this?!! Now I have to wait! This is torture. Good, wonderfully written torture. *pounces on you* I'm not letting you go until I know what happens.
person Cin
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an intense chapter! I'm left speechless. It's great like all your other chapters! I can't wait to read more! Keep writing!
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is amazing! From the time I found it I couldn't stop reading it.
Usually I find these stories to be to slow, annoying and drawn out, making me skip most of the chapter, but I have been hanging on every word that you have typed down. Naruto isn't a retard like usualy and though Saske is angsting sometimes he doesnt get annoying.
I must agree that Sasuke looks like a gay pirate in his outfit, but he sounds mighty HOT in the new one!! And his hair does look lie a chickens ass! XD
I was suddenly struck with insperation for a picture. The picture that Sai drew of Sasuke, the one that he cut up with his sword, I would LOVE to draw that picture and I was hoping that you wouldn't mind if I did.
I can't wait until the next chapter is out, keep up the awesome work!!
-Kimmi

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