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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading the first chapter and I find your story captivating. There is something bothering me though. I'm french and fermé la bouche doesn't mean anything. Did your beta use an online dictionary? Because it looks like a mistake one would make. You should say something like "ferme ta bouche" (close your mouth), or "Café A la bouche fermée" (at mouth closed cafe), "ferme la" is more used (shut up). Hope it helps you.
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I just loved it! A bit too much sun and happiness for me but still!! Wow you rock!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet, fluffy ending. I'll get cavities!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story... couldn't stop reading it once i got started... i am officially putting this story up as one of my favoirte sasunaru.... sorry that your beta is MIA at the moment, hope he/she turns up soon, not that your story needs it... keep up the great work and can you do me a favor and email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you write the epilogue... can't wait to read it =^-^=
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWWWW *weeps tremendously* this was such a sweet ending. i'm just bursting with happiness that they worked everything out. pluuuss got to read another lovely scene of sasunaru smexing. fantastico! lol Anywho, yay for you, i loved ALL of it
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I shall eagerly await your return.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I hope you update soon!
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the better fanfictions I've read in a long time. Entertaining and heart wrenching all at the same time. Truely fantastic. Brava.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A:YAY Sex!
B:Damnit! I must know what happens next!
C:Please continue. Pretty please?
B:Damnit! I must know what happens next!
C:Please continue. Pretty please?
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jus' finished chapter 3. This is some good shit. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)