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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN! That was good.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic Saro, very well written. And it was actually a threesome with Naruto and two girls that really worked.
Please continue this or do another one! Like Naruto/Sakura or Naruto/Ino. Anything, please.
Please continue this or do another one! Like Naruto/Sakura or Naruto/Ino. Anything, please.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done, the descriptive writing flowed very well, and naruto's perspective and interpretations of sakura, and especially ino fit his personality.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Well. That was hot, brilliant, well written, hot, fun, creative, and did I mention HOT? I plan to read your one other M/F fic when I'm in the mood again, and I will be hoping for more in the future. I have honestly never thought this before, but your writing style makes me wish I enjoyed yaoi. Thanks for the memories!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahoo, I wanna read more!
Exelent work!!
Exelent work!!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice smut. Very nice. Cold shower or where's the kleenex nice. This is my favorite threesome and I really hope you continue with them. Have Naruto turn the tables with Kage Bunshin or some such.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet story is there going to be another chapter or a sequel to this one with inosauknaru
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Damn.
That's all I really have to say about this. And I'm a rabid NaruHina fan to boot, and this STILL rocks out loud. Nice job.
That's all I really have to say about this. And I'm a rabid NaruHina fan to boot, and this STILL rocks out loud. Nice job.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME it should be kinda continued eh it kinda ended fast? but AWESOME NONE THE LESS
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN