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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS FIC ROCKS!!! I CAINT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER I REALLY WANT TO C WAT HAPPENDS NEXT. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . .
This is really good. Possibly the best KakaNaru I've ever happened upon. You say a lot by saying very little, and your grip on character psychology is firm and very believeable.
One thing though: you desperately need a beta. There are so many misused commas that I was cringing. I can be your beta reader if you want. I love to edit. If you're interested, shoot me an email at jcat_muse@yahoo.com.
This is really good. Possibly the best KakaNaru I've ever happened upon. You say a lot by saying very little, and your grip on character psychology is firm and very believeable.
One thing though: you desperately need a beta. There are so many misused commas that I was cringing. I can be your beta reader if you want. I love to edit. If you're interested, shoot me an email at jcat_muse@yahoo.com.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome fic! i can't wait to see more!! just to let you know as well, i've just published a fic you might enjoy. Just Another Scar is listed under Male/Male, please read and enjoy my fic just as much as i enjoyed yours... hope you post another chapter soon! Ja
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, THIS IS SO GREAT! i dont care how long it takes to get an update. as long as we get one, i'm happy. i cant wait to read kakashi's reaction to naru's proposal. thanks so much for writing this for us kakanaru fans. looking foward to more!
~Devious
~Devious
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying reading your story.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. A mistake here and there, but overall the narrative flows fairly smoothly, and Kakashi x Naruto? Do want. I like the light-hearted nature of the plot, it's refreshing, and very "readible". Please keep up with the great work!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Baby I'm so proud of you. Besides making me post your story you actually found time to review mine ;__; What did I do? *looks around* I just read it to you...Outloud. And I read it again >D While sitting here and flipping through my ideas. God I love that scene when Kakashi found our little blondie in the hamper Mwahahahahaha. Though I soooo wanted him to drag that little bastard out and molest him v.v Me want SMUT. Delicious smut from my D-ness *cling* It's perfect honey, just perfect *___* Me love you long time. <3
Baby I'm so proud of you. Besides making me post your story you actually found time to review mine ;__; What did I do? *looks around* I just read it to you...Outloud. And I read it again >D While sitting here and flipping through my ideas. God I love that scene when Kakashi found our little blondie in the hamper Mwahahahahaha. Though I soooo wanted him to drag that little bastard out and molest him v.v Me want SMUT. Delicious smut from my D-ness *cling* It's perfect honey, just perfect *___* Me love you long time. <3
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there's no mindless sex or kakanaru smutification.... gah!!!update sooon!!!!!!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update this soon...*-*
Even though you wrote you'll update it 'whenever' which, I guess, means I'll have to wait agesfor the nrxt chapter but I can't easily find KakaNaru fics so I really hope the update will come soon as I enjoyed this first chapter very much. It was funny, clever and rather original compared to some other things I've read...^_^
Even though you wrote you'll update it 'whenever' which, I guess, means I'll have to wait agesfor the nrxt chapter but I can't easily find KakaNaru fics so I really hope the update will come soon as I enjoyed this first chapter very much. It was funny, clever and rather original compared to some other things I've read...^_^
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oww come ooooooooonnnnn, update soon pleaaaaaaaseee????!!!!! this is so make my stomach ache, soooo funny and addicting, a very good fic!!!