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by crowincarnate

person littlefox1227
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! gaara's awesome! he's so funny! i love this story so far! please keep going! and i hope sasuke and naruto get together too. KAWAII!
person Deidara
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I like how this story's progressing, but it could use some fixing. In my opinion.. I mean, I don't really like too much of Gaara's character, but for your story it fits. Same with Neji.

But I LOVED that hermaphodite comment Gaar said to Sasuke.. frikking hilarious xD

Please continue to update this.. just 'cause I don't like how the characters are portrayed(I mean in-characther wise) doesn't mean I won't continue reading. ^^
person Kristen
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Wow, I've read this on fanfiction.net. Any difference over here?
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very fun i really enjoyed reading it and i didn't even realize you were the writer for New Family till i visited your author panel. I read New Family on FF.net and i liked it, i think i might even have it on my fav list but i don't think i ever reviewed. It was great and this story as well is shaping out to be awesome. I love that you poked fun on cliques but i really like how we get to see Gaara's thoughts through his dairy because otherwise he's a very hard character to understand. I look forward to your next installment
person COOKIE
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome,Awesome,Awesome! This is a wicked story, keep it up. :)

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