rate_review Reviews

Excellent! 4 wonderful chapters! MORE PLEASE!!!

I like this story, so glad you updated. This chapter was pretty good and moved the plot along w/out being boring. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I just have to say that I love your Gai. He's adorable.

And that was the sweetest thing ever! One of the most romantic things I've ever read. I almost cried, damn you.

Hahaha I love this paring and I love this fic! It made me smile and lough and brightend up my very gloomy day! Thank you! ^^

Can't wait for the next chapter. I loved the part about Iruka's parents, it brought a tear to my eye. I'm glad they made up, but I kinda liked the bickering. Pls update when you get the chance. :)

This is so fun! I love the autographed shorts! The skunk! Kakashi upset that Icha Icha techniques didn't work! Kakashi sleeping and spooning. The L word! Ok--there really isn't anything I didn't enjoy! Gai is the perfect comic touch too! Please update soon!
Thanks for posting!

Your story is great. I just read chapter 3 over on live journal. Thanks for including the link in chapter 2.

I like it so far. Hope to see another chapter soon.

Funny. Witty. Original.
I loved it ^^
It wasn't corny, you were literate and I thoroughly enjoyed it without getting pissed off at a missing story line and too much smut (yes, there is such a thing as too much smut =_= )
You even stuck to the characters!

Ehehehe

Keep writing! xD

I really found this to be a fun and enjoyable read, I really hope you'll be able to work on it. I was a little worried at first that Iruka was going to be this poor weak little ninja that needs to be rescued but then you had him handle himself rather well in a fight, it's interesting to get these two sides. I can accept Iruka as a little rusty but I have a hard time with people who portray him as completely usless, if nothing else instinct and training would kick in. Anyway enough babbling I don't want to distract you from the next chapter you should be writting. ;)