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for The Right Way

by nayru

person LonelyDove
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story...loved it...hope to see more from you again!!! ^_^
person jewel
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved this story. sorry to see it end. the ending was fabulous.
person Onawa
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...That was just beautiful! I just melted in a puddle of sighs. A wonderful mix of romance, intimacy, trust and balance. I really am sorry to see this story wrapping up. I hope you continue to write stories like this!
person emp78
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!! Seme Iruka loving Kakashi. And promising not to tell Pakkun! lol. This is a great love story. Can't wait to see how it ends.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, waiting for the oly man on your mind. I know how that feels... I love this fic so keep going!
person ALD
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you in thinking that was a good place to end the story. I'm intrigued to see what you're going to surprise us with in the very last chapter/epilogue. I'd just like to reiterate how much I've enjoyed your story. You started just as I was getting into this pairing, and Naruto in general, and it will always be one of my faves. I really hope you continue on with this pairing and can't wait to see what you write next.
person ALD
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I can't wait to read about Iruka being in charge, I can just see him blushing the whole way through but nonetheless enjoying every bit. Well, two more chapters to go and I'll be forced to find a new story to latch on to. Update soon.
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, hotness and sweetness all rolled into one. I felt you did that really well :d I loved how Kakashi just jumped Iruka as soon as the door was closed, the term 'sex-starved' comes to mind loool, but it was great :D

Update soon, ne?

Hina xXxx
person Onawa
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh NO! Only 2 more chapters 9_9 I am so sad that there are only 2 more chapters!!! It is rare that I find a nice long story filled with engaging plot and an author who updates regularly. Nice lemon! Sweet Kakashi and Iruka! I will be on the look out for your future stories.
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!! lol. i love this story

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