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so sorry, my review got all screwed up i see. Oh well, screw it then. D: I can still explain the html in an email or something, if it IS html this site need, i dunno. i'm not used to this site. x.x *noob*

eh. megasob@hotmail.com?

I like your writing. It's beautiful. Please continue.

How sad. I though at the first chapter, thet Itachi and Kakashi had a hidden relationship, because Itachi kept slapping him. Hihi

That was a really good story, you kept true to the characters and it really was really good. I mena that. Hope to read more soon.

What I love about the story is defenitely that so many trying to invade itachi's personal space. What I love even more is that you manage to write sad and funny and cute all at the same time - I was already really impressed after the first chapter and hoped that the story would continue like that, funny thing is, I like it even more now.

Well, while I'm at it: Meh lovez itachi. Very few stories 'bout him. The ones that do exist are often some murderer's mind excuse, but really, I like your itachi so far. He truly is fourteen/fifeteen. *thumbs up*

Keep up the good work ^__^
(and please mail me teh new chapter~)

ah, here's my addi °_~ -> limelikelemon@hotmail.com

Wow! wow! woW! this is the firts time I review a ficc in months. In fact, it's the firts time since I known adultfanfiction.net that I review a ficc. But this one...I love it! i love your style of writting, its very original and really deep.

I love whenever you write Sasuke POV. I love the way you combine his curiosity, his innocence and yet all the knowledge he has for a 9 year old. The last paragraph of the second chapter was so amazing, i loved it! And everypoint of view is so different, it makes you have an idea of everything thats happening.

I could go on and on about your greatnesss, jajaaja. Hope you keep updating because this story is great.

So, the second chapter's up. It got me into my silent mode. It got me thinking. It's ... I don't know what to call it, but it's definitely a good thing. You let everyone see a little more of Itachi and Kakashi (I like your Kakashi) and I can't wait to see more of all of them. Thank you for the chapter.

Beautiful, absolutely and breathtakingly pretty and hurt. It's been long since I've read a story so carefully thought and written, I can only hope time allows you tow write further 8)
Your alternative universe is quite like the ones I like to put them in, somehow only the added details and time more that mine lack ... or I could just say I utterly love the story >u< yay 4 itachicentric!

I'm intrigued....continue!