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Make it a two-shot with Naruto (and Shino) coming back to Konoha pregnant with Shino's baby!!! I wanna see the look on his face! Mwa hahahahahahahhahaha!!!!!!!!

Please, please, please continue with this story. There's so much more I want to know. I want to read Sasuke's reaction when he sees Naruto with Shino and if Naruto gets pregnant, that is so much the better. I honestly think your story should have at least another chapter, just to clear everything up. I vote for you to add another chapter. Please let it be soon, I'm so desperate, I love this fic. PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE (Gets down on knees and cries)

Anyway, sorry about that.

PLEASE are you gonna update any time soon??? I want to know what's gonna happen next. This is one of those times when I feel desperate to know what's going to come next.

I would really like to see another chapter for this story^^
I usually don't go for this ship but you pulled it off so perfectly. You left me wanting to know more.
I hope you decide to write another chapter
'bow'

TWO SHOT! TWO SHOT!

*sniffles* That was beautiful... My soul cries out for another chapter, or even two. I need to know what happens next. What happens when Shino and Naruto go back to Konoha? Does Sasuke confess and get shot-down horribly, preferably with a death-threat from Shino, and kills himself with a spork? Does Sakura get lynched by a mob of Naruto's friends? How does Shino's family react? Does Shino pick a fight with Sasuke to get revenge for Naruto? Do they have a happily ever after?

*puppy eyes*
PWEEEEASEE do another?!
If you do, my email is h_oneybunz@hotmail.com ^_^!

Ougon

Please, Please, Please, make this a multi-chaptered story!! I like Shino and Naruto together it's so sweet and I need my daily dose of Mpreg!! If you are gonna update email me at kagenoshiseisai@aol.com. Hope to see another chapter to this...this story is really good and I looooooooooove the angst!
~Kami~

This has an incomplete feel. Yeah, it makes a great one shot but at the same time, it needs more. I think you need to complete the plot and make it a two shot!

please add more to dis story, its so good. and for da lemon just do what ya think fits with da chap. it dont matter what ya do, dis is a good story already.

Hey please send me the updates to Taking Advantage please i love this story i look for it when ever i come onto here so please if you can send it to me at DStarStarlight@aol.com.
Thank you.Ja Ne.

O.O This has to be one of the most emotion invoking fics that I have ever read and I love it to pieces. I've never really had an interest in Shino/Naruto but you have converted me over. The language you use between the two is beautiful; and Naruto isn't so emotional that you wish to bash his head in with a stick. Which makes your story that much more awesome.

But you must continue with this fic, in either another really long chapter or separating it doesn't matter. And I must say I would like to read a nice descriptive lemon, make it fluffy and gentle to keep with the tone of the story but I would like to know the details. I am addicted to smut ^.^