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I would definitely like to see this fic finished in a multiparter. It is such a great fic now. It's different not only because of the pairing butthe story line has a different twist to it.

I would like a longer story 5 plus chapters would be great,
i'm looking forward to all of the smut between Shino & Naruto.
And i want to know how Sausake is going to react to Naruto being mpreg.
Love the story so far.

You handle the pairing well and you managed to still keep them in character.... that's a big deal for a crack pairing. SO, huge kudos to you for pulling it off.. :D
It would be great if you could continue this story as a small multichapter, so we can get a better sense of the relationship developing between Shino and Naruto.
Right now, it's just a tease... but already you get a sense that it would be a very loving relationship.
I really do love the whole idea of Naruto carrying Shino's child and best of all - it's never been done.
In regards to the lemon, I would rather see you just concentrate on the story and let the plot develop in its own way. If you're actively having to plan a lemon - there's pressure to deliver... which could prove disasterous.
If some citrus content comes into play... that's cool but I would definitely be more interested in seeing where you take this story.
Good luck!

Hmm I think multiple chapter would be better. And as for a lemon, of course it would be nice but I think you should concentrate on the way you want the relationship between Naruto and Shino to turn out and don't try to force a lemon in there. I'm so happy that you'll add at least one more chapter to this because I so wanted to read more.

I say multi-chapter! It would be easier for you to do than a very long one-shot to the two-shot.

More!!! Much more. You have the beginnings of an epic tale here, run with it.

There can never be enough lemon. 'Nuff said.

methinks you should do a multi chapter, since it seems like a REALLY good story; at least, I like it a lot so far ^_^

damn, and here I thought you updated. =D

I'm not sure which I want more. You did exceptionally well with just the one chapter (I thorougly enjoyed reading it) and I think that one more really long chapter would be wonderful. But I can't help thinking that just two chapters isn't a long enough story =/ would the story itself turn out longer with the 5 chapters instead of 2, or would it be the same length with just more chapters? If it's the same length then I say two chapters (because I'm impatient and don't like waiting around for updates =C) However, if the 5 chapter story is longer then I want that =D

While smut's almost always a good thing, I prefer plot over smut. If you think a lemon would ruin the flow of the story, then I vote leave it out.

Sorry, ^-^;; I hope I made what I want clear. It kind of seems like I'm a little indecisive >.>

I would be very happy with a multichapter fic; I definitely couldn't stand it, if it stayed as a one-shot. I'll read as much as you want to write - I prefer longer fics on the whole.
As for the lemon, I think it should be vague allusions to, with warm tones, sorta like rose-tinted memories.
Please keep writing; I love this fic and have been waiting for more since you posted it.

okay, since this is such a great story and I am in love with long single-chapters, thats how my vote swings on that one... as for lemons, i will shamelessly beg for some shinonaru goodness!!! pleaaaase!!!
-direwolflilith