rate_review Reviews

This is strange. The writing and detail is good, but the two people in this fic don't match anyone I know in the Naruto series, much less Naruto and Hinata. Emerald and gray eyes...I don't know who that could be.

People are picky. Pay no attention to that other review. Some details were off, but you rock. You are the first one to write my story, and I love you. I am, as we speak, doing a happy dance.


And as a side note to the first reviewer;

I posted that challenge this afternoon. So this was, quite literally, a couple hours work. So unless you think you can do better, be nice. And if you can do better, be nice anyway!

I have spoken.