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by Jelp

person llyoung
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write good smut. I read and enjoyed both chapters. And personally I think it is more realistic when the top and bottom switch back and forth.
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought both of them were awesome!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan of both pairings and boy did you give me and overload of smut heh - i think it's safe to say you also made my night ^_6 that was hot. capital H capital O capital T H*O*T* HOT loool okay I think I got my point across looool so thanks for the incredible smut and i'd choose if i could - but i can't :d i loved them both heh and when Naruto goes all Kyubi well *shudders* it just makes things better :D

Thanks for the update :d really I mean THANKS lol

Hina xXxx
person dana
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked your sasuxnaru and naryxsaku smut extravaganza. both where really written but i liked the sasuxnaru just a little more because i think that the sasu in this story is definetly a seme. some would say that because he becoming an expert in piosons that he should be uke but i will disagree. i did owever like the naruto gang bang scene in the naruxsasu smut that i thought was pretty cool. i vote that the next in the story smut scene go to sasuxnaru. thanks and can't wait for the next update.
person sensen
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE/NARUTO all the way. it would be strange the other way around.
person beeku
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O
I really like this.
It's good update soon!
person Gwyllion
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs* What an excellent chapter! Please keep up the good work. I will patiently wait for your next one. :) Your Sasunaru is so HAWT!
person nekoluver666
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be better to make it Sasuke/Naruto. I don't think Sasuke is quite ready to be uke. It just seems as if he has a bit too much on his plate to really let go. Does that make sense???
person spikemyangel
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think both the boys should get a chance at being seme.....but i think ultimatly, Sasuke should be king of the mountain! i vote SasuNaru.
anyways, i really love this fic, it went in a totally different direction then i thoguht it would from the begining - yay surprises
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NARUSASU! NARUSASU!

Omg! I seriously love this story... the not-cannon bits are awesome. I swear Dokueki is my fav. origional character of all time. Usually I despise Sasuke beyond all belief but I seriously love your perception of him.

Ougon

Ps= NARUSASU! XD

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