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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has the potential to be a fascinating fic. Could you please continue it?
person tsuki
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kya~ you HAVE to update the first chapter is awesome^_^ me likies this story very much! yay!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! please continue!
person Teania
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty cool the end was kinda grafic, but hey! I don't normally read pairings other than the ones I know of like sasunaru, but I think i'll keep up with this story, even though I know almost nothing about Itachi and welll....nothing about Sai, but hey, I can deal, so keep writing, I wanna see Itachi wake up!
person kawaiiyaoifangurl
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome!!!!!!XD i lurvs yourstories.ive read all of them and tyhey are all awesome!!!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey I am slowly becoming a huge fan of yours... I like this story update when u can but work on why orange first....ty ^_^*
person Lici
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mayhap, a bit rushed, but not too bad. Your fight scenes are getting much better, if a little less detailed, but that's okay. Vague is not bad. Ita-kun got his ass handed to him, more-or-less....And that's kinda funny....(Don't kill me Itachi-san! Sai will get mad!)

And GO Naru-oniichan! You're so cool!

*eh, hem* fantastic, and inventive. Poor Sasuke is going to be surprised.

Ja ne!
person Onawa
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this story. You have an interesting Naruto here. Also never read about a good Itachi. Wow - guess it is true that you don't like that other fella.
person Onawa
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and please put me on the update notification list for this story as well.
person anonyponymous
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just wanted to say, Please, please, please put up a spoilers warning on this one! I got a nasty shock just reading the author's note, but I kept reading anyway, and it may have been really good, but I had to stop because I haven't gotten that far in the manga yet and I think it may have ruined some of the surprises for me.

It seems like you are doing a good job, but PLEASE put up a spoilers warning!

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