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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person Nell
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It would be a nice payback to have Naruto sleep with Itachi.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this just keeps getting better and better. I love Naruto in this, only because he won't take shit lying down. but then again, he never does. excellent work! I hope you update soon.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa O_O that's a lot of people Sasuke's slept with. God heh I'm doing a good job of mirrorring Naruto's emotions, I don't understand wither and it pisses me off because Shino and Shikamaru's words come off sounding so patronizing, largely because what they say si coming at a time when Naruto doesn't really want to hear what they're saying I suppose, it does seem almost like they are trying to rationalize but - I suppose they do know what they're talking about. I like how this new information isn't putting Naruto down and that he's working it out in his head and I also like how you kept Shikamaru very much in character despite the situation they were in ^_^ chapter was worth the wait.

Hina xXxx
person dana
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah yeah for the update. sorry to hear you were unwell and i am glad to know that you are better. looks like naruto and you both got your stregnth back. i can't wait to see how long he makes sasuke wait to get some again. oh how i see the citizens suffering. i hope your health continues to flourish and improve if this is the results.
person Jelp
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another heart-breakingly good chapter! Keep up the good work. :-) Glad to see you updating again. ~ Jelp
person pinkmooncrystal
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story...really good story. I love it so much. Your plot has me really captured. I hope you update soon. I also hope that Sasuke gets a taste of his own medicine or something to that effect. Naruto should make him suffer.
person Rosebud
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic is wickedly twisted and I LOVE it.
I do hope that you’ll post more soon! ^^
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this side of Naruto!!! I can't wait to see how he punishes Sasuke!! :)
person SasuNaru723
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Chapter 12 ending is so great!! I MUST KNOW MORE!!! Now it's Naruto's turn to take charge! This will be very interesting to read in the next chapter or so! ^_^
person SasuNaru723
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow -this is soooo good! I just got hooked from the start! I don't usually take liking to rape and torture stories -but this one I just love and can't seem to stop reading!! Please update to chapter 12 as soon as possible! I must know how this story turns out in the end and see what happens to Sasuke and most especially what Naruto does! ^_^

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