rate_review Reviews

I know you said English wasn't your first language, but I think you're doing a super job (and it takes guts and effort to write in your non-native language -- I'm really impressed)!

I really like how you word certain parts of the story (what I've read so far -- I'm hoping to have more time to read on later!), and apart from the occasional spelling or verb-conjugation/tense mix-up (which even native English-speakers do), I find it reads very well.

It took me a few chapters to realise that sometimes, the one-shots aren't related to each other. It is really neat to see the different character-traits that you bring out in each chapter. You portrayed a longing-Naruto, innocent-Sakura, and possessive-Sasuke really, really well.

Congratulations on such a good job! *hoping to be able to read more later!*

hahahaha, Sakura and her bunshin-abuse of power. :D

awesome story

You have an amazing grasp of the English language! (Not easy for someone who's learning it as a language other than their first!) Not only that, but your imagination and heart truly gives these stories so much life. I truly enjoy reading these, and I'm constantly finding myself coming back and re-reading them. Thank you for writing so many excellent stories!
Peace,
~Aimereta

I've just finished reading the anthology of Sasu/Saku oneshots you've written and am very impressed. I hope you continue to write and share your work with us. Thank you for a good read.

Thank you so much for the review!

'Anthology' is an AWESOME series. I really do mean that. I've been a fan for a long time! I just recently started writing for SasuSaku, so I'm really thankful for the good review. After all, it's authors like you that made me such a huge superfan of SasuSaku fanfiction.

xoxo
sammy_sakura

I agree, our avenger does indeed deserve a happy ending.
Sasuke never said 'I love you' to Sakura...but you are right, he doesn't need to.
I'm new to this site, I decided to upgrade from fanfiction.net...and....this is
the first story I read, and reviewed here. Good Job. Thanks for writing, I hightly enjoyed it.

-YS

I deffinitely think you should turn the Possession Side stories into a real fic, it has a great base for a lenghty story that I would love to read. The other stories were very good as well, a great way to spend my time, thank you.

OMG! This was fantastic! This story is something original, something pefect!

And as for being Italian, your gramma was perfect ;D I only spotted about 3 small mistakes, so i thought it was great!

Well done on a great story! xx

Hehe:) I read the entire story on FF.net! I love it, though you have to finish it soon on FF.net cause I likes that one;) Good Work!!!