schedule
September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!!
schedule
May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaawww! Cute!!*fangirl squeal* It is too good to be a one-shot. As someone wise once told me, "If you feel it's incomplete, then you must complete it yourself." Well, I acutally said that, but what the hell, I usually talk to myself outloud anyway.
schedule
December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you made more of this, it doesn't make much sense as a oneshot. But, it's been a while, will you ever continue this?
schedule
December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this pretty pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *_*. I liked this really much and the lemon was just perfect!!! Pleaseeeeeeeee write more soon~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
schedule
August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should make this a multi-chaptered story. It has a lot of possibilities and I'm a sucker for angst. Hope to see you post an additional chapter.
schedule
May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to continue this story!!!!!!!!! It's absolutly wonderful as is but you could make it O so much better by continuing it!!!!! I hope that you will continue it and make it all the more worth while!!!!! PLEASE O PLEASE*big Naruto puppy dog eyes*
schedule
April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon xD
schedule
March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no one shot more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule
March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You should make it a story. It's got one hell o a premise that you manage to set up nicely in one page. I hope you do continue.
schedule
March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You must continue! Sasuke was ever so sweet and I so want to see him holding Naruto and his child again! PLease!! ^__^ Yayness! Such a great story!