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for When He Comes

by GoldenSensei

schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! Continue! Great Naruto characterisation!
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's a good start! I liked it! it seems that you have something to work with here XD and I'd read more for sure

kiki
person ai-chan
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyah
dat made me really happi~~
man wat sasuke said, it's making me giggle lyke a lil girl~~
cute~ if its still a TBC! i will hell read on!
you got a companion? lol
keep it up! oxoxo
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was good :D... but I noticed you put a '?@ next to TBc, I understand why you might not be sure to continue but if you wouldn't mind it'd be nice if you would ^_^, I'm intrigued :D

Ja!
person Bunni07
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Frikin' Awesome!! I loved the picture that popped into my mind at the last few lines...I definately think you should continue it!! ^_^ Yes yes!! I always get over excited when I read a fic about Sasuke comming back...but this seems/feels completely different! I soooo can't wait for another chapter! Love the style of writing, too! ^_^


*Me
person emp78
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue! like it!
person Zrina
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome start!!! can't wait to read more!!! please please update!
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sounds really good so far!
person Eternel
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good! can't wait for the next chapter I really want to read more of this, it really is off to a good start.

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