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for Imitation

by edwee42

person Smichiko
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. Loved the ending.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was prity cool :)
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that sure was a great twist. :D But I hope he'll get the real thing next time...
person yuriko
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, i was like what was with the title until i read the last paragraph, cute story
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I love the ending. Good work!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if anyone else had thought of using those two jutsu's together to ease an itch! I loved it. I look forward to reading more bunnies. LOL
person Tleilaxu
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad but the ending was AWESOME!! I was not expecting that well done!
person Trollmia
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice touch with both the jutsus and the funny little ending. And I do can see Jiraiya doing such a thing too :)
person nimistar
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the ending is disturbing but the story and details are good.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one word:
WOW!!

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