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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, another hot chapter. Please continue soon! Oh, are you gonna make Itachi and Sasuke take Naruto on stage. wahh! Please?
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh. I never realized before reading this fic how much D/S dialogue sounds like some kind of Drill sergeant / trainee exchange.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When you write GaaraxShika, it's poetry. I find myself holding my breathe. It's all so fascinating really though.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapters with Gaara and shika. Thanks for writing.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I adore you, I would worship at your feet if I thought I was worthy.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the last chapter. ::swoons:: so sweet. what's so awesome about your story in general is that when dealing with some heavy hitter kinky shit, it's reinforced with romance; love behind the lust. It gives so more dimension. It's the real motivation behind the fuck that makes the story more successful. Again I have to say this story is great. Keep up the awesomeness :-)
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, but I think I found couple of typos:
chapter 5: "Then you will take fifteen stokes" ->strokes?
chapter 16: "He said there in position" -> sat?
chapter 23: "The sunlight grew brighter in the Western -acing window" -> facing?
chapter 22: "“God, you’re ass was made to be fucked!" you're -> your?
Is Sasuke going to get a corset piercing? ^_^
chapter 5: "Then you will take fifteen stokes" ->strokes?
chapter 16: "He said there in position" -> sat?
chapter 23: "The sunlight grew brighter in the Western -acing window" -> facing?
chapter 22: "“God, you’re ass was made to be fucked!" you're -> your?
Is Sasuke going to get a corset piercing? ^_^
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would have never though about those two together. But I loved it. They were warm and sweet with their inter thoughs for each other. And it wasss h o t :) Shik&Gaara yea baby!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*purrrrs*
Absolutely DELICIOUS, as always. I look forward to seeing where you take this... and who does what with whom. :3
Absolutely DELICIOUS, as always. I look forward to seeing where you take this... and who does what with whom. :3
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww so sweet