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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really needs to continue! I got this weird flash in my mind of that scene from Grease 2 when she is working at the gas station and he rides up and sweeps her away. Only in this case it needs more violence. It is not a Naruto and Sasuke story unless they are fighting.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This most likely sounds really lame... but I'm not reviewing the story... so much as I am reviewing your rules to flaming... plus you had a dismal amount of reviews on this one anyways so I thought I'd try and bump up the number. Love, Loved! The guide to flaming, and a friend has asked me to flame her work for her... so I shall use your guide ot the best of my abilities, thanks for the tips and the extra confidence.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I agree with many of the other reviews I read for this 'one-shot'.
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It needs another chapter~!!! -Pulls at hair wildly- You can't leave us hanging like that, thinking and assuming all of the naughty and delicious things that could possibly take place in the near future! -rips tissue from box and dabs at invisible tears-
It's just so...So.... Gah! too many possibilities, I say!!
Ahem. Back to my cooler side.. It was nice, I liked how you wrote it, and it's fine as is, but still... If you ever get bored, I sure as hell wouldn't mind reading up on this a bit more. :]
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It needs another chapter~!!! -Pulls at hair wildly- You can't leave us hanging like that, thinking and assuming all of the naughty and delicious things that could possibly take place in the near future! -rips tissue from box and dabs at invisible tears-
It's just so...So.... Gah! too many possibilities, I say!!
Ahem. Back to my cooler side.. It was nice, I liked how you wrote it, and it's fine as is, but still... If you ever get bored, I sure as hell wouldn't mind reading up on this a bit more. :]
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! you should continue ^-^