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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really am liking this story. I think its awesome that they are all really "seeing" her for the first time. Genma is hot.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome great job please update soon...and sasuke you are such an ass i hope sakura punches you and no justu in the world can repair your pretty boy face.....um.....keep up the good work :)
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please. I wasnt expecting drama and excitement, but Ill be damned if I turn my nose up at it. Especially when it involves a sexy jonin like Genma!!!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! What a great start to a story. You have me completely intrigued and dying for more ^___^ As much as it irritates me, I do like your asshole-Sasuke XD, he makes me giggle with what an ass he is. Naruto is written perfectly, and I do enjoy your Kakashi very much. Very cute, can't wait to read more.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems good. A rather interessting coupling.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I want More !!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You rock! I demands more. =)
I like your set-up to the story. You have a good plot going, and you are doing especially well with the characters. I giggled a bit... I really enjoyed it, so I will be anxiously waiting for more.
Thank you thank you thank you!
I like your set-up to the story. You have a good plot going, and you are doing especially well with the characters. I giggled a bit... I really enjoyed it, so I will be anxiously waiting for more.
Thank you thank you thank you!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a great start! Poor Sakura, always getting picked on :( I hope Genma is gonna be ok, and joins the hot spring fun!! Genma = yummy!!!