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Hundreds and thousands of cupcakes for You!!!!!!

Okay, I am only on chapter 1, but I do believe that this is the best plot I've ever come across in Naruto fanfiction. I'm enthralled to continue reading this (OMG, you already have 4 chapters for me to read). I commend you greatly for writing this, it is a brilliant piece thus far and has my interest piqued.

*Lemon Drops shoves hundreds of cupcake reviews in your lap, hoping you will eat them all and write more, MORE!!!!!*

Okay, not to be the psycho reviewer (I'm apparently lethal with cupcakes), but I do hope that you will find the time to write more (I will also be reading your other two stories on your profile).

Your fanfic has really made me want to write, I've been in such a slump lately. OMG, I really like the plot in it, it has me glued to every word! I haven't had a fanfiction that I've been this excited about since "A Tenuous Grasp" by yaoi_is_my_antidrug started on here on AFF.

The one thing that I might offer as advice would be to slow down, don't rush quite so much. I think this has the potential to be one of the best Naruto fanfics out there, but it does get a bit confusing at times, and sometimes there isn't enough story sandwiched between the dialogue. I really, really want this to be the best it can be, so if you want a beta (I'm not sure you would) or someone to do a harsh critique of it, please email me (is in my profile). I would be glad to give you some of my time to help you out.

*stacks piles and piles of cupcakes at the authors feet*