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Gahh!! A cliffhanger :'( Cruel, cruel tease.How could you be so cruel. Regarding the actual ending, I shall say nothing lest my theories prove to be true and hence spoileriffic, they need fine-tuning regardless XD But you're drawing from filler arcs..................I guess I can forgive you providing you keep up the standard. ^__^

I really liked this chapter, I was kind of taken by surprise by the outcome, but it was great plot development. My only concern is that I got confused in the bathroom scene when she prepares to leave. I had to read it twice because I was getting lost in what she was trying to do. great chapter, I am eager to read more. Hope you're having a wonderful week!

I think you did a good job of building up to the Hoshi Shinobi being the badguys! I'm excited to see the next one, but eep! Are you alright? I hope you didn't suffer anything serious in your wreck! Take all the time you need, of course.. Life comes vastly before fanfiction! So please take care and I (and everyone else I'm sure) will be patiently waiting for you when things return to normal :).

Wow! What a great story! I never read anything about Pagans before! And you have such great interpretation of their personalities through their totems!

But can I ask what a cat would be? Trust me, I need to know.

Hey, I've had a great inspiration! I was thinking of making a Guardian for Ms. Paige Stone from Spira of FFX. A black mage/warrior that can defend her by her chains and her scimitar and her black magic. She'll be a half Guado and will go by the name of Ayako and was sent by Wakan Tanka. I could write up a chapter or two for you and you can decide whether you'd like it or not. Just e-mail me if you want it or not. 'Cause if you don't, I'll just use it for my own character.

sorry to hear about your car, but great chapter as always....the sociopath shinobi really pisses me off though; I hope we are going to get to see him taken down eventually. Looking forward to 29 0/

It never rains but it pours. Good luck!

So, this was very, very interesting. Thank you.

Bear Country! *Slaps forehead* Of course! Heh heh, sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I have been reading fervently. Just wanted say GREAT story and lotsa luck with the car buying.

A car accident!!!!OMG 0_0 Thank god you're alright. Cars are insured, your body is less easily replaced. Don't worry about your update rate. Some of the authors I read can take months to update (they know who they are) but it is always worth the wait. I'm all thrilled now. Just what do they want, I can't wait to see XD

Thanks for updating. This story is getting better and better. Thank you for keeping with the story and not ditching it like a lot of other people do.

Wow, I love this story. I have become really emotionally attached to the characters, I love how you mixed in the religious aspects so smoothly with the story. I think it flows so well from chapter to chapter. I am so excited to read more of this story so I am looking forward to your next update! Although I will have to kill ObsidianLace for not telling me it wasn't finished. I think I might be falling in love with Shino too...*looks a little embarassed* Can I be paige? ;)