rate_review Reviews

I am very interested in this fic... I can't wait to read more!!!!

So cool!! Update soon!!

Poor Naru, Sasuke's such a meaning. Your character portrayal is really good, though. I can't wait for the next one. I also thought that your descriptions were very expressive in this chapter. Keep up the good work.

I really like this, its very interesting, and there personalities are really realistic. I know others have probably said this, and I know you said you don't write details, but it would really improve your story. I do like the way you write, but the language is so straightforward. The voice you use is interesting and unique. I envy you for that, but I would like to see more details. I hope that I haven't offended. It's my honest opinion though, but considering this is your first yaoi, its very thought out and interesting. That impresses me because I can tell you my first yaoi didn't turn out as well. I look forward to reading more. Oh, I love how you ended the last chapter. Its very suspenseful. I can't wait to see what happens.

im intrigued by this, and i like the dynamic you've put naruto and sasuke into. i feel like they're reasonably in character for an AU, which isn't easy.

i hope we see more soon ^.^

AHHHHH! Poor naru-chan!!! :'(
Bad Sasuke, Bad!!!!!

very nice!
i love a pissed off sasuke!***( my dad always says that it better to be pissed off than pissed on)***grin
your chapters need to be way longer!!
pleeeeeease!

please update soon!!!! really good so far!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what will happen next.

wow that was surprising.. the counting i mean.. never thought it would be the number of whips poor Naruto would get.. man the boy is gonna be re~~~alyy sore.. update soon neh~