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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah silly interaction. I was hoping for more sex but I'm too amused to be disapointed. :D Suigetsu and Karin are funny. :D
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this story is freaking hot! I can't wait to read more, especially with Naruto under Sasuke's control.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was gooood! So, I was confused about if this was a one-shot or just a starter chappy. Oh, the possibilities with this group! You could do so much with team "hebi"!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant! you cannot leave this as a one-shot!!!!!!!! please no! have mercy, it'd be cruel to all of us!
~swoons~ evil sasuke! soooo good!
i really hope you either continue on with this, or start something like it!
luck!
~swoons~ evil sasuke! soooo good!
i really hope you either continue on with this, or start something like it!
luck!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Please continue!!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this I would like to read more about what happens to Sasuke and Naruto after Naruto awakes again.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhh mmmmmyyyy gggooooodddd (god)
Great job, I love it. Mwahahahaha please keep going, you are doing a great job, and I can't wait for the next one :D
Great job, I love it. Mwahahahaha please keep going, you are doing a great job, and I can't wait for the next one :D
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Sasuke is a evil bastard and I love him. I only wish the manga would pair these two up...without the rape, of course. I so love this pairing and can't wait to read more chapters.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
littleolmee.........i think I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been waiting for a story with Team Hebi in it ever since they appeared! *Sigh* You have just made me day! And what a way to start it off *blushes*. I'm glad you also put that Naruto nearly had 'em. Pls update this soon!
I've been waiting for a story with Team Hebi in it ever since they appeared! *Sigh* You have just made me day! And what a way to start it off *blushes*. I'm glad you also put that Naruto nearly had 'em. Pls update this soon!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the third story of yours i'm reading. I cant seem to get enough of your writing style. Looking forward to the next chap. Good work :) !