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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! woot for a new chapter!!!
hope to see another one soon
I like this story so far!
hope to see another one soon
I like this story so far!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love this story. It is so good. I liek how Naruto is slowly warming up to thier relationship. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if there's any way how to bribe you to update this sooner, just tell me. i'd be willing to do anything for that. :)
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you reposting this story again for some reason? If you are, I hope its because you intend to finish it. This was an excellent story and I hope you keep up the good work.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love this story. The beginning of this new bond is so sweet. I can't wait for it to grow and grow.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!!
cant wait for the next chapter1!!
cant wait for the next chapter1!!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore the new rewrites. Keep it up!
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm... More? Hehe.
Altought this is a SasuNaru fic, you did a great job at picturing other members of team Hebi, I'd even say that you described them better than Sasuke and Naruto , heh. It actually gives an impression the we see SasuNaru relationship, interaction, through the eyes of his comrades - and that's great. You're language is good and easy to follow, so - thumbs up. Good job! ^^
Altought this is a SasuNaru fic, you did a great job at picturing other members of team Hebi, I'd even say that you described them better than Sasuke and Naruto , heh. It actually gives an impression the we see SasuNaru relationship, interaction, through the eyes of his comrades - and that's great. You're language is good and easy to follow, so - thumbs up. Good job! ^^