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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i completely agree with you, sexual tension is quite delicious and it makes for such a fun and captivating read, very nicely written!! i really loved the chapter and deidara and sakura was just too cute, aiya, i almost want them to get together! as always, your writing and descriptions are wonderful! can't wait to read more so continue soon!
-hasu86
-hasu86
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
This is awesome, please continue if you can!!!!!
This is awesome, please continue if you can!!!!!
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yup, Tobi is a good boy! :heart:
I really do enjoy your story. Not only does it make everything so believable, but it's written very well, AND it has regular up-dates! That's very rare on FFnet, let alone AFFnet. Sometimes I wish I could just come back to this story and see it all completed so I can just continue reading to my hearts content, but I am happy enough that you up-date once a week.
I can't wait until the fighting scene. I can picture either Sasuke or Naruto (The rest are lagging behind somewhat) appearing, and then Sakura (upon seeing them) instantly turns on either Tobi or Deidara--whoever's closer. I don't think she'd do it to Itachi (Maybe Kisame, but not really), as he's so much more powerful that I think he'd go after the appearing enemy then attack her, and she'd want to get rid of the weaker targets so they don't randomly, and annoyingly, appear during a fight with the stronger ones and kill off her allies.
I'll await the next chapter!
I really do enjoy your story. Not only does it make everything so believable, but it's written very well, AND it has regular up-dates! That's very rare on FFnet, let alone AFFnet. Sometimes I wish I could just come back to this story and see it all completed so I can just continue reading to my hearts content, but I am happy enough that you up-date once a week.
I can't wait until the fighting scene. I can picture either Sasuke or Naruto (The rest are lagging behind somewhat) appearing, and then Sakura (upon seeing them) instantly turns on either Tobi or Deidara--whoever's closer. I don't think she'd do it to Itachi (Maybe Kisame, but not really), as he's so much more powerful that I think he'd go after the appearing enemy then attack her, and she'd want to get rid of the weaker targets so they don't randomly, and annoyingly, appear during a fight with the stronger ones and kill off her allies.
I'll await the next chapter!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh please update soon ^_^ i love Tobi!!!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, can't wait for more, it was little but great. I got my reactions, and I loved Deidara's eyes lighting up. (I hope he doesn't die against Sauske in the Manga) Have a good week!!
Jo
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!!1 Mini Tsunade PAWAA!!!1 Too bad she doesn't have the extra artillery to match. But that's fine, those sag horribly with age. XD
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Please update soon!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wait every week for this story........please update as often as possible......................................PLEASE....
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! i really enjoyed it! is sakura ever gonna heal deidara's arm?? i hope she does, he's such a loveable guy, well actually all of them are with the way you wrote them and how the story's progressing so far. can't wait to read more so continue soon!
-hasu86
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again I say: awesome. Looking forward to that next chapter ;)