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for Naruto: All in the Pack

by UzumakiIno

schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very great! I hope there will be another update soon!
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't leave that many reviews, but I have to say that I really liked this! I hope to see more of what happens to the pair, and how they deal with their mother!
person devil
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad, not what i normally read but it was ok
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I never thought of Kiba and his sister, as Kiba isn't all that popular character in normal, het pairings. Well written, I can't wait for your next chapter.
person Kipling
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....my god, great minds really do think alike, don't they? I swear to god I hadn't read your story prior to writing mine. It was really just a response to a kink meme. Also damn I enjoyed yours. (I'm taking mine in a different direction as regards with Tsume, at least, I think)
person Kipling
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. Thank you for the review. And no, I haven't read your fic before, but I'm delighted that there's another person who thinks Inuzuka kink would be awesome. I didn't know you'd published this! ....and I am sorry about the similarity in titles. Dammit. if I could think of another, I'd change mine.

Now I'm off to actually read your story.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this, as many have said, not really used to the incest part, but it was well written and I enjoyed the read :-) hope theres more to come
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was...interesting?
This was new, that's for sure.Kinda Disturbed me, but I have not idea why since I love Hinata/Neji stories. Guess its bcuz they're sister and brother.

Anyways, if the idea of Hana and Kiba so new to me I so would love this story.but i so would like to see another one about them.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Please continue.
person LDE
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wondeful work, i was completely engrossed in the story and when that happens i know i've found a keeper :) a little D/s a little incest...ahhh life is good!
please keep it going, i'll be keeping my eye on it!
Lady S

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