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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO FAR SO GOOD...JUST ONE LITTLE THING...YOU MIGHT WANT TO WORK ON YOUR SPELLING...IT WAS ONLY A FEW THINGS HERE OR THERE, BUT NO BIGGY...IF U NEED A BETA I CAN BE ONE FOR YOU, LET ME KNOW! ANYWAY! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yummy...thanks sharing Shika's thoughts, more please.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know the strange thing about this story is that there are no spelling errors and you use proper Grammer :)
Besides that, It's a really good start, can't wait to see where it goes from here, I'll stay tuned.
Besides that, It's a really good start, can't wait to see where it goes from here, I'll stay tuned.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG really, really good! I love the TemaShikaIno love triangle. There's just so much that can be done with it. Awesome use of detail too - it really brings your story to life. This is going straight into favorites so please don't take too long with the next chapter, PLEASE~! :D