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by Simca23

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you Fuck them anyone can make a mistake. I like the story so far and i'm looking forward to reading more.
person KaiPhoenix
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...wasn't expecting that...but good for you, stand up for yourself...it takes alot of guts to put something out where people can read it...

on a different note, that was a great cliffhanger for the last chapter...
person naruske
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it the begining seems promising and i would like to see what happens in the storie for your first fanfic i thought it was prety well thought out
person naruske
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want more *pouts* plzzzzz
person emp78
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I'm sorry that you were insulted. Those people can go sit and spin. (That means they can shove it up their asses and rotate.) I look forward to your next update. If you need a beta, you can e-mail me at perkiellen@gmail.com I haven't done it before but I think I could do a decent job.
person yoyozz9
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like the way this story is going so far. i have to admit suicidal naruto stories are my favourite. keep up the good work! cant wait for your next update!
person Simca23
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Blush* Thanks for the reviews it helped me to write more! And if anyone wants to beta please let me know i need one as you can see =/ thanks <333333333 Cookies and hugs for all!
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't just leave it like that! thats soo evil!! you must update!!!
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't just leave it like that! thats soo evil!! you must update!!!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds really good! You could use a beta to help with spelling but the story is good! :)

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