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for Riding the Tube

by Adi

person Mikra
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this, and would love to see more ^^
person ai-chan
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgosh xD
i loved it o.o
love love loved it
sasuke n narutos emotions are rather amusing n unique
also just recently i learned from my friend in england what a tube meant lol
a coincident? lol
anyways enjoyed your story alot! wubwub
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AWESOME!!! It took me awhile to review since, the force of my nosebleed sent me out the second story window. After I got back from the hospital, I read the rest and went 'awww', He has him, yay!!
You are too good! I am gonna go find a train or packed bus now! Later!
person zaccheo
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no smut?

heck, i dont care the scene at the train is fucking hot, anyway. like woah *fans self*


zacch
person Haowek
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cute, really enjoyed reading this.
person kaesaku
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww~
cute ending!
a sequel will be really great.. *hint hint*
hehe..
^_^
person MeLaiya
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not baf. Pretty good actually. Is there more?
person Allys
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Yay, you posted!! I still think that the end is the sweetest thing ever and I just love the idea of semi public molestation, XD. I wanted to leave a review but didn't want to repeat myself, so nyah :Huggles:.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* That was hot.
And "Sasuke, a gay-in-denial and Naruto, will-hump-everything-on-legs" Has to be the best line ever!
person dragon_agility
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The tube x 2 hehe! I really liked it, a cool idea and hot too *melts*! Yayness for British Fangirls *waves flag*

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