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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, now that was just loves... thankyou so much for this nice little smutty piece XD
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... my Raidou can be such a meanie. I'll bet Kotetsu will be a better boyfriend from now on, though. Nice lemon, btw. (Mine read more like insert tab A into slot B. I'm working on it.) Kotetsu's frustration was palpable. It may just be me, but I could feel that undercurrent of danger in Raidou. He's quite the bad ass, but we rarely see it. Very nicely done. I hope you'll write another soon.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yum. I do so love chuunin and jounin smex... Kotetsu talking Izumo to his orgasm was so very hot. Ha ha... poor Kotetsu. I loved how controlling Raidou was, in this chapter, especially. There's something about a man getting two other men ready to have sex that's incredibly sexy.
Great job, and I hope to see more chuunin/jounin action from you!
(Oh, and... catch the fever! Yes! Ha ha!!!)
Great job, and I hope to see more chuunin/jounin action from you!
(Oh, and... catch the fever! Yes! Ha ha!!!)
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*ahem* I just read that all and... How HOT can it get? That was... I need alone time now. :P
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I am enjoying this. The voyeurism, the dirty talk, the little games... hhhoootttt. And I'm glad it's getting longer than you had planned on, otherwise I might have missed it! ^_^
I look forward to the next chapter!
I look forward to the next chapter!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and you added a bottomed Kakashi.. O.o oh, now that was just lovely :D I love how you had uberslut!Izumo react onlyto Kotetsu's use of teh word fuck XD
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN. Kotetsu and Izumo are some of my favorite Naruto characters! I always thought Kotetsu would be more naughty than Izumo...just how you wrote him! Love them both and loving the story! Keep rocking it!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kotetsu x Izumo with a side of Genma x Raidou? Oh... I love you!!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing*
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, this storie is goooooood!! Well done very um, intrestin plot twists. THIS STORY IS SOOOOO FRIKIN HOTTTTT|!