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by LindyStar

person Anise
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fun story, everytime I see an update I know that there's going to be more smex, can't think of anything better! I was thinking that if Kakashi was willing to give up some control he could let Iruka top, maybe it would help wear him out a little. Just a thought but for now I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter, toys! XD
person llyoung
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Silly Kakashi - jealous of himself when only a few minutes earlier he was happy for
the help the clone provided (I liked that). Looking forward to the toys.
person Hen
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that last chapter was so sweet! But does Iruka need any more emergency sex now?
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. The smut was hot the fluff was endearing. *sigh* great combo
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!
person Shinigami24
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Beyond steamy! *muses* You do realize when Jiraiya's special potion wears off that Iruka probably won't be able to sit down, much less walk for weeks afterwards? By the way when/if you f-lock your entries, how can I access your chapters at KakaIru? I'm a watcher of the comm. But I go by another name there...
person Shinigami24
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I asked because KakaIru is one of my favorite pairings and I want to add this ficcy to my memories at LJ...
person Jirian
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet....that was a nice fanfiction cant wait for next chapter :D
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoooo-wheeee!!! Now that, was worth waiting for. You go girl.
person Stacy
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that was direct and to the point! oh god i loved it!!
i have not checked your other stories yet.....
so, if you have not written a sasuke/naruto story like that....would you?!
oh, make sure that kakashi has a huge gift card for toys r us!!
***grin***

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