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for They Are Just the Cleaners

by Raina

person Lynn
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I can't believe it took me so long to check my email. I'm so sorry you are feeling so bad. :( *hugs u* Gah! I love such random parts, like the Haku part, I laughed so damn hard. Does that mean I'm mean? I also like the comparison of Makayla and a dog. Haha. Yea, I think I'm mean.

Lynn

Keep going!
person nlb
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for telling me about the new chapter. Since my favourite stories on affnet aren't updated too regularly, I'm not here too often. And I would have really hated to "miss" this update. ;-)
You did a good job with the paragraphs, my eyes say a humble thanks.
Poor Sasuke...why doesn't he just get a divorce? Because his wife is really, really annoying(and no, I have not pity with her, since it is so obvious he doesn't love her and she just wanted to marry him because he is beautiful, like an accessoir).
I can't wait till Sasuke and Naruto meet.
person Pooh The Bird
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. xD
Suigetsu and Sasuke.. :O
(That's still not going to be the pairing right? xD )It was hot.
Mmm. Interesting story.
The long chapters are a great plus too! xD

I love yaoi..
Neji's gay too, right? RIGHT? xDD
And just to make sure.. Is one of the pairings going to be SasuNaru?

I would like to see more!
Update soon again!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so excited to read more! Please update soon!
=)
person Imagy
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wheee~!
another chapter up and about
roaming around
graceing the world with its beauty
love it ^.^
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you'd like I could beta it for you or just offer some advice, I'm pretty opinionated but nice. Although, I'll confess my grammar skills aren't the greatest, but I'm not terrible. Anyway, I really like your story, so if I can help in any way let me know. Since my email isn't shown its donahoecarrie@hotmail.com
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I missed the last chapter... which was wonderful. Sasuke is just so sadistically brilliant in this. I have a terrible time keeping him that way in my own writing... I swear, he gets around Naruto and turns into a giant bowl of really sexy goo.
That said, I'm sorry that life is getting out of control. I completely understand the sentiment. If you would like I would love to submit my 'application' as beta or even listen as you bounce your wonderful ideas around. Let me know.
michele604@yahoo.com
person Imagy
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey darlin'~!
No problems on my part, this story is totally worth waiting for ^.^
but if you need an ideas person, I'm definately your go-to girl
so, let me know if you need any help
I'm more than willing to give it~!
Hope you're well,
Nikki
;D
person Imagy
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
P.S.
To contact me, email me at fuzzy800@bellsouth.net
'til then,
c-yah~!
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't mind helping out, send me a message!

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