rate_review Reviews

Hey! I'm loving your story! I don't usually stray far from the ninja plot related stories, but this was pretty good. As for those dresses ur making, not to pry or anything, but are you making a wedding dress and prom dress for your self? Cause then you'd be making one hell of a transition!
Thanks for the fic!

I am loving this story so far. So original, so much potential. Can't wait for the next!

Erm... please tell me you are continuing this.

The story's really interesting. I like how you've managed to describe the details so well.

So please continue updating. Looking forward to your next chapter :)

Ooh, intriguing! And the plot thickens! Please continue this wonderful fic!

Vivi: Yay! Naru-chan's not stupid~! I like him to be oblivous sometimes, but not flat out stupid all the time.

Venny:.......

Vivi:....Don't mind him, he's angry because there was no smut.......Or Sasuke.

Venny:.........-glares-

Vivi: But he likes it, too! He just wishes the yaoi would hurry up and come........No pun intended.

Venny: -smiles- .......But it was still nicely written. I only caught one spelling error.

Vivi: See? It isn't all about the yaoi. We like the story too!

Venny:.....But that doesn't mean we don't want the yaoi.......I need the yaoi.

Vivi: Ignore him. I can't wait for the next update!

Ja ne~!

~Vivi & Venny

alright, you got me. i'm intrigued and now i wanna know what the hell's gonna happen. can't wait to see the rest of this fic. good luck.

i agree with u all the way a stupid Naruto is so annoying

Vivi: Wow, I was surprised by how many locks Sasuke had on that.

Venny: Damn, I wouldn't have been surprised to have read that some sleeping gas went into the air when he removed the picture.

Vivi: I know. But yea, poor Kanky-chan! 'm feel sorry for him. To die like that, by Sasu-kun no less!

Venny: Ha, ha Sakura-bitch! You ain't gettin' nothin'! ITS ALL FOR NARU-CHAN BABY!

Vivi: I laughed at her. Really truly I did. Any real woman.....or maybe just crazy people like me.....Would have went off on Sasu-chan. No matter how hot. She's a 25 year old, married, virgin. I'm so, so very surprised she hasn't cheated it. .....I would have. Or left him..... Something!

Venny:.....I wouldn't have.....

Vivi: O.O ......you lair.

Venny: Yea. But really. That one girl. She cussed more in one sentence, than I do in ten.

Vivi: But 'm like your story!!

Venny: Yep. Can't wait for Naru-chan to come in!

Vivi: ....wonder how that's going to happen....

Venny: Eh. 'm too.

Ja ne~,

Vivi and Venny

youve cought my interest,i like your use of blood and gore and avoidence.be waitin for the next chapters/continuations if you diside to(hope so)anyways good luck im ruting for ya!


~kai