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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, obsessive much?
Naruto's incredibly astute for his age.
Naruto's incredibly astute for his age.
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chaper so far. Please continue!!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm..kinda dark and depressing..but nonetheless interesting..this kindof reminds me of Gravitation..Sasuke as Yuki..and Naruto as Shuichi..lol, update soon!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this so far. it seems like it will be very interesting.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Why am i just not gettin acquainted with your work?? This prologue was beyong awesome! My goodness your writing skills are tremendous! I'm sure you have many fans already but you've just made a new one and i'm looking forward to reading all the fics you've produced and will produce!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love shota *.* I want to thank you, I'll really enjoy reading long story with good plot ;) Lil Naru-chan is so adorable! XD Hope maybe in next chapter we gona find what Sasuke is thinking abouth him - I'm curious - he may don't care, this would be just like him...ah! - I want to find out how you gona show his character! XD
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(sorry If I made any errors, english isn't my first language and I'm still learning )
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(sorry If I made any errors
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! It's very intriguing and different. :)
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an extremely well done beginning. A very interesting start to a story. It definitely draws the reader in. I like the small understanding between Sasuke and Naruto, and its so cute that Naruto watches him everyday almost like a hobby. This story has definitely caught my eye, what ith the excellent writing skills and creativity. I know I'm going to enjoy this one ;P Please update soon!