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for Unrequited Bliss

by Adi

person Dragon7
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
person onobaby
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good. I just LOVED the ending with the whole hands thing...i don't know why...AND it's a NaruSasu (Woot woot). Can't wait for more! Oh, and it caught me from the start! I love hard kissing...that always makes me want to read further. Love the hard kissing XD
person sadistickiss
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dreamy smile* Ah... your writing... your writing is so beautiful T_T. It's so easy to fall in love with. I love this. It's angsty and Sasuke's a bastard XD. I enjoyed reading! Thanks for posting it for us to read. I'd love to see where it goes XD!
person hina88
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very beautifully written, everything jut seemed to flow together and the angst was there and the tone of it felt haunting towards the end :) it made me shake my head in dissappointment with Sasuke when Naruto asked him what had changed and he took the coward's way out *sigh* you said drabbles right? I'll be checking in ^_^ definitely

Hina xXxx
person LadyWolf
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. I like anything Sasuke and Naruto related, well not everything. But this one was very good. Can't wait to read the next one!
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I like the title. Perfect tone.
person Dragon7
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chica, your angst skillz grow and grow. I borrow a line from Zrina's 'Not my lover' (Shameless pimping) when I say I 'don't know whether to cry, touch myself, or both'! Lol. I want to bitchslap Sasuke and then hug him, all in the space of 600 words.
You are a demigod! Use your powers for good and not evil. Screw that, use your skillz to write more pounding butt-secks.
LOVE YA!

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