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by Mako75

person Rosebud
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!!! So, Naruto already knows Gaara huh? Interesting! I can't wait to see where you take things from here! XD Keep it up!!!!!!^^
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....


Orochimaru is always so creepy and disgusting. >< bleh!
person hisoka
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasukes angry and horny. or PMSing i cant tell.
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schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL oh OMG! this is just too good! "No Ramen." Oh man that evil and very smart! your a grait author! I realy like this fic!
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA Sasuke is cruel.. no ramen.. *snicker* love the story!
person Rosebud
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!
I really like your style. I always get so absorbed into this story and then when I get to the end, I'm like "nooooo I need more, " lol. But seriously, this is an awesome fic and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was awesome, "no ramen" worst punishment ever! Well, worst for Naruto, lol. SO OMG this story is like.... wow. i swear, i never would have thought it from the summery but wow, this is now a total fav of mine! Just the progression of the story is, so, well, ideal. I cant even express what this story is like... actually i could but it would turn to a slightly perverted essay. Keep writing, i cant wait for the next installment. the way you have written the kissing is so perfectly erotic! Cant wait for more!
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No ramen! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo how can Naruto survive without his ramen. I must know!
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha. No ramen. That's a cruel and unusual punishment. o_O
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG I love this! There have been a couple slave-master stories I've read, and I've liked them all, yours included. Keep up the good job, I like Iike!

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