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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha. falls ova laughing
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it was so nice!!!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing and the epilogue was hilarious. ^.~
~Ana~
~Ana~
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I loved it!!! This was your first fic online? It was great! A little adivce though, if you use Word you can catch your mistakes easier, if you don't I recondmend a Beta. Keep on writing such delicious stories. Ja!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you (x3). I loved it.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... So sweet. Wow. You actually made Itachi... so understanding and caring. I really like it. ^^,
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very beautiful! I will surly dream about the story tonight! Er..I mean..Heh! ^ ^;; This story really lifted my spirits because I had a really bad stomach flu, so..Thank you!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i abso love this story it is the best i've seen in a while...and better then anything i have written...for now?
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I loved it!
Itachi and Naruto are perfect for each other, and this story was sooooo good! I hope to read more from you in the future! XD
Itachi and Naruto are perfect for each other, and this story was sooooo good! I hope to read more from you in the future! XD
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
H O T
Yay, I really enjoyed your story.
Hm, your characters acted authentic (although Itachi is pretty much caring...)
and your writingstyle is great (flowing, funny).
I especially liked the scenes, when Naruto did his "fish stunt" *laugh*
I can imagine this scene so well ^^
But there's one little thing I have to "criticize":
It's a big plot you used for your story (one night stand becoming relationship, Sasuke's
reaction...). It may would have been better to expand the story a little bit more (not only one shot).
Hmm, we in Germany say :"In der Kürze liegt die Würze" (= Brevity is the soul of wit)
so this isn't a real critic point.
Nevertheless, this was a great story and differs very much from 90 % of the stories on aff.net.
It wasn't only sex, there was plot ^^
So I really hope that you will bring up more stories and of course update soon.
And one little request: longer sex scenes = PERVERT ^^'''''
Bakuma
Yay, I really enjoyed your story.
Hm, your characters acted authentic (although Itachi is pretty much caring...)
and your writingstyle is great (flowing, funny).
I especially liked the scenes, when Naruto did his "fish stunt" *laugh*
I can imagine this scene so well ^^
But there's one little thing I have to "criticize":
It's a big plot you used for your story (one night stand becoming relationship, Sasuke's
reaction...). It may would have been better to expand the story a little bit more (not only one shot).
Hmm, we in Germany say :"In der Kürze liegt die Würze" (= Brevity is the soul of wit)
so this isn't a real critic point.
Nevertheless, this was a great story and differs very much from 90 % of the stories on aff.net.
It wasn't only sex, there was plot ^^
So I really hope that you will bring up more stories and of course update soon.
And one little request: longer sex scenes = PERVERT ^^'''''
Bakuma