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for Now It's Getting Interesting

by palimpsist

schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This.Was. So. Fucking. GOOD!!!
I was kind of in the mood for a PWP so the sex with clones sounded good. Started reading. Thought, yeah that was cool, oh look, more chapters hmmm... what the...? O.O THERE IS A PLOT IN THIS STORY! Omg! I was sooo happy since I usually don't stay in the mood for PWP's for long.
A plot about two people that love each other but are insecure and are starting to fell stuck. It's a subject that have been done before, but for some reason this story felt new and original. I don't know how you did it, but you did. And it is absolutely wonderful. Not to mention the lemon. Susuke's memory from the mission was hot as hell.(!!!)
Now I wonder how Sasuke is going to fix this. Or how Naruto is going to get past the betrayal thing. I haven't read a Naruto story with this kind of eagerness in a long time.
Damn... I didn't check when you last updated but I hope the next chapter is on the way.
I sooo looking forward to reading more of this.
person Misa
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow it's great! I find the plot really interesting and I'm anxious to know what will happen next. The clone action was fun, but omg, Sasuke won... I prefer NaruSasu XD. Nah, whatever, I like your writing style, please continue and have my love <3

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