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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good. You haeva couple of spelling errors and a case of using the incorrect word("disguarded" instead of "discarded"). Other than that, you're fine. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
R U KIDDING!!! It was a dream? Dang, is anyone else having a "Bobby Ewing being dead on Dallas" moment? Sorry, dating myself. LOL! Well, it was kinda cute anyway, but geez, what a let down. ;-)
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FIC!!!!! So good *chuckles* the only thing that gave away this being your first lemon yaoi was saying neither regions XDDD
But oh man I was upset at the end...A DREAM?! HOW COULD YOU!
Before this I wasn't a SaiNaru fan....NOW I AM!!! so hot *drools with fangirl faced hazed in dream mode*
I love you and Kendra for giving you this song ><
MAKE MORE STORIES!!! and AFF.net is a good place just not a lot of people review songfic oneshot stuff >> though now they might just to make me look like an ass xD
GREAT JOB!
But oh man I was upset at the end...A DREAM?! HOW COULD YOU!
Before this I wasn't a SaiNaru fan....NOW I AM!!! so hot *drools with fangirl faced hazed in dream mode*
I love you and Kendra for giving you this song ><
MAKE MORE STORIES!!! and AFF.net is a good place just not a lot of people review songfic oneshot stuff >> though now they might just to make me look like an ass xD
GREAT JOB!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEHEHEHE!!!! I love it!!! Naruto was dreaming and yeah!! I told you taht was a good song and I told you that you coudl write smut!!!!! LMFAO!!!! I am all giddy now!!! I love you!!!
*tackles and glomps, then runs*
*tackles and glomps, then runs*