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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an incredible story! This is going right onto my recommendation list. I swear, its stories exactly like these that are the reason I got back into fanfiction. I adored the plot of this story, you made it so much more than just smut (although I loved that too). In this short story you pulled on my heart strings and made me care even more about the couple I already loved, well done!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh!!! That was so HOT!! EROTIC!! SEXY!! That was just AMAZING!! I think my mind melted back there during the story do to the EXTREAM HEAT spilling off the pages I read!!! Sucks I have to leave for work now....would love to reread it!!! Will have to wait when I get off from work....dang it all!! I really LOVED IT!!! :)
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAM THAT WAS HHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! loved it is there going to be a part 2 ssooooooooo need to ANY WAY BYE LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!! ^_____________________________^ ^.^ T.T Bb
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! You really got me going with Naruto's dream, I thought it was the real thing! I was like "wow this author doesn't waste any time!".
I like your writting style and the end is real funny! Please continue with the good work!
I like your writting style and the end is real funny! Please continue with the good work!
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo, HOT. lol, nice story or w/e you want to call it :)
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it great job
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyahhh >__________< this was so cute~!! <3
that last paragraph reminded me of a christmas story LoL <3
that last paragraph reminded me of a christmas story LoL <3
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. I have yet to read one where Naruto made a clone of Sauske. Odd isnt it? But damn this was hot! You have a way with words! Great job!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe! Thanks for the review, love! I appreciated it! I'm hoping to get the next chapter out soon - with hopefully more reviews! XD
Btw, did you see how I put you on my homepage! ^^
Btw, did you see how I put you on my homepage! ^^