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by ShiranuiV

person Dorkchic
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutly LOVING this story so far!!!!! Cannot wait to see where this goes. Great writing and looking foward to the next update.
person pen_name
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaai! Mooooore! Just like you, I can't wait to be back on the field! Oh, and I can't wait for the lemons either! Cheers!
person pen_name
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was too laze to log back in, good thing you set this fic to let everyone review XD

Anyways, I have to say that this was a great chapter. I particularly like Kakashi's part of the story. It's touching but not in that way-too-emo-that-it-became-annoying way.

Great job, and keep up the good work!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like~ Please update soon!
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I like that you gave everyone a chance to show what their feelings were regarding the game and not just Naruto's take on it. However, I wonder do you plan on shifting the scene and showing what Sasuke is going through and I am really curious as to why he left with no explanations. I wonder does it have something to do with his blonde friend? hmmm

I look forward to your next update.
person aiesha
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! this is a freaking tight azz story! i love the originality in it... but most of all... I LOVE SOCCER!!! Your doing an excellent job, keep it up. I wait in much anticipation... love midnight. ja ne.
person pen_name
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yesss! It's out! Will we be seeing some locker room action then? *drool...*
person Haowek
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic idea! I really enjoyed reading the first two parts of this story! I hope you update soon!
person Feion Phylar
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty damn good. Nicely written. Keep that chappies coming man, keep them coming.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
neat story. Please continue.
=)

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