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for The Falling Leaves

by bleachedserenity

person terb8210
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with domo, I would love to see this story continued. The Idea of having Naruto sneak out of the village to meet and spend time with her would make for a good plot, it has even inspired me into creating my own Narut/Tayuya story. There are very few good Naruto/Tayuya storys out here on AFF.net, but yours is one of the better ones and I would deffinatly want it to continue and be more than just a (very good) oneshot.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have 2 agree that there arent alot of naruto tayuya pearings and the should be more
person domo
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That story was great. Funny thing is, I could actually see this happening within the realm of the story. If Naruto's forced smile was anything to go by, he wasn't so hung up on Sakura (maybe even a little hurt), when she asked him to bring Sasuke back to her. I would love to see this continued. Maybe even having him sneak out of the village to meet, and spend time, with her. It would make for a good plot.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They were a little ooc But still a very good fic! btw you should make another chapter like when naruto go's to rescue sasuke he runs into tayuya
person serhoth
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. I also like the pairing, but I pretty much like all pairings with Naruto and just about any of the ladies. Plus its fun reading Tayuya. I hope you write more.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. There truly are too few Naruto/Tayuya fics in the world, or Tayuya/anyone for that matter. Anyway, more Naruto/Tayuya in later chapters would be cool, preferably under strange circumstances. ;)

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