rate_review Reviews

I've read a similar fic with a slightly similar plot. But then again, you twisted it differently. And sweetie, you are in dire need of a beta reader. You have one too many mistakes in your work, especially with the spellings. Typo error to be exact.

I'd like to volunteer as a beta reader but if you don't want one, that's fine.

pretty good story. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes. Well it good anyway.
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good story but you need to reread it to remove some of the spelling errors.
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SO far your story seems interesting but I hope you don't take this as a flame. I am not an English teacher and I know some of my mechanics aren't always on point but I get by. Well Basically I was wondering if you have a beta and if not would you like me to beta for you. I totally understand what you are getting at in your story but its a little confusing. Please don't be offended I like the story overall and I think its a very smexy idea. *runs off feeling bad now for pointing it out*